As long as I have it true..
That pearl has always be set to the purple
It has no fear to the dark stone,
but definitely must be devoted by frozen throne
They said, “it’s always be the same.. why??”
As long as I have it true..
The dust can’t make any movements without wind
And of course there will be no scattered waves
However, dews always exist between them
They said, “what’s wrong with you??”
As long as I have it true..
Castles made of sand fall into the sea, eventually *)
Never was so much owed by so many to so few **)
Be honest, you saw more than rocks, sands, and even caves, don’t you?
They said, “ooh.. it’s just some problems”
And if it’s true..
It will be three sheets at rendezvous
No doubt, it’s the harmony of sea, sand, and sun
So I close my eyes and open up my heart
I say, “obviously.. there are no longer the two colors”
* Castles Made of Sand – Jimi Hendrix
** A famous speech made by Winston Churchill to the House of Commons of the British Parliament on August 20, 1940, at the height of the Battle of Britain, often viewed as the most critical turning point of World War II.












This is one serious poem!
Way to go!
By: raizamn on June 18, 2008
at 10:07 pm
bikin sendiri tuh puisinya ndik?
By: neng eti on June 19, 2008
at 2:38 am
@raizamn: ooh… nampak serius ya… hehe
@neng eti: knp? ancur yah? padahal itu mikirnya 2 hari T_T
By: Andik Taufiq on June 19, 2008
at 2:46 am
Itu bkn puisi, cerita aja, cz diksinya krg bagus, (cie diksi,, :p)
By: Nindy on June 19, 2008
at 5:04 am
ah sebel banget sih gw gak pertamaX…
~x(
By: irfan satriadarma on June 20, 2008
at 4:18 am
aih… cantik betul…
gambarnya, hehe
By: antya on June 20, 2008
at 4:27 am
very nice!
By: Tristan on June 21, 2008
at 1:52 pm
very delicious
By: Agust Andy on June 24, 2008
at 10:28 am
jago euy bahasa inggrisnya
By: aaaci on June 27, 2008
at 5:58 am
potona di pantai mana thu??? kerennn *gak fokus gitu ama tulisanna* kqkqkq
By: RoSa on July 14, 2008
at 9:54 am
looking for new poeltry
By: realylife on July 17, 2008
at 3:56 pm
iyah, potonya kerennnn…
ga merhatiin tulisannya ;p
By: fathy on August 17, 2008
at 4:01 pm